Into the Future, a set of 4 for [profile] open_on_sunday challenge #89 - Time

Dec. 7th, 2004 11:27 pm
darkhavens: (sx a love eternal [literati])
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Author: darkhavens
Title: Into the Future
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: PG-13
Email: darkhavens@slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.



First Time

If it hadn't been so important it might have been easier.
Laces got tangled.
Buttons got lost.
Fumbling. Awkward. Intense.
Too many knees and elbows.
Muscle cramps in a thigh unused to bending like that for so long.

Trepidation.
Spike had only topped that once, under Dru's insistent direction.
Xander had bottomed... for Faith, but that was all he'd ever done.
(Anya had scared him silly that day, with the dress and the condoms and... stuff.)
And on top of the usual stresses and strains was the thought, in the back of both minds:
What if the chip goes off?




Seconds To Spare

"Gods, Spike, that was close! I thought for sure she was going to catch us that time!"

Spike reached out and fastened a missed button on Xander's shirt, taking the opportunity to tease his lover's nipples, still tight and sensitive beneath the soft cotton. The week it had taken to talk him into the piercings had been well spent.

"Never happen, luv. I told you, I've got eyes in the back of my head and ears like a bat. There's no way the Slayer's ever gonna sneak up on us shagging, no matter how loud you're begging and whimpering..."

"Spike!"




The Gift of Time

There were five Akrashkin demons, not four; a fact they discovered too late to make it count.

The fifth came out of the trees and took the hindmost member down. The one who’d agreed to hang well back to keep him out of danger. The one who only had time for one last scream before being felled by a mess of piercing, viscera-exuding wounds.

Spike let no-one near his fallen lover; he rent the midnight air with primal howls. Ignoring Buffy’s cries to let him die he tore his wrist and let the gift of dark eternity trickle in.

“Please…”




Futureflash

“…And humankind believed demons weren’t real and magic was sleight of hand.”

Xander grinned at his audience of pale, awed faces.

“Now, off to bed, or Spike will come in and tell you what he used to get up to Topside, and then you’ll never sleep.”

Spike waited for the last child to scurry away to the sleeping halls before stepping out of the shadows. Xander was already on his feet.

“Sire… Spike, you had us worried, you were so late!”

“We lost a couple of tunnels, luv, but Angel’s on his way back with fresh supplies, and a mage…”

on 2004-12-07 11:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] moimoietmoi.livejournal.com
Nice set of drabbles!
Very realistic first time and the future fic is really intriguing! It makes me want to know more about this future with Spike, Xander and Angel working together!

on 2004-12-09 02:43 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! First times are fun to write when they're so awkward and realistic. *g*

And the future one has intrigued me too. It kinda came out of nowhere...

on 2004-12-07 11:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
lovely set!

I especially like 'First Time.'

on 2004-12-09 02:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank, sweetie. It just seemed real to have it awkward and unsure. *g*

on 2004-12-08 12:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hellespont.livejournal.com
*sniff* Spike turning Xander to save him from imminent death is the only way I can really get behind the idea, and you did a good job with the grief and drama of it. And I'm happy and intrigued with their new life underground. I always enjoy your drabbles so.

on 2004-12-09 02:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I always enjoy your drabbles so.

Aw, thanks. :o)

I like the idea of Xander being turned so he can stay with Spike, sometimes, but this one just had to be a 'too late!' scenario, with Spike desperate to keep his love. And the underground stuff came out of nowhere! I hope I can come up with more of it. ;o)

on 2004-12-08 12:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] willshenilshe.livejournal.com
Oh, I absolutely love these. From the sheer reality of the first one, to the fantastical world opened up by the last drabble, you have me fascinated. I particularly want to know more about that future world. Wonderful work!

on 2004-12-09 02:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I particularly want to know more about that future world.

Oh, so do I! *g* Thanks.

When I started out with such awkward realism for the 'First Time' drabble, I had no idea I was going to finish off with something quite so fantastically unreal. It has me intrigued. ;o)

on 2004-12-08 12:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] authoressnebula.livejournal.com
Oh, that was nice. Very, very nice. All the flashes throughout different points...just too cool. But the one word that really got to me the most was that one 'please'. Loved it hun; thanks for sharing!

~Nebula

on 2004-12-09 02:56 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

But the one word that really got to me the most was that one 'please'.

Yeah, poor Spike was so desperate to keep Xander he was willing to risk losing him to the demon. That 'please' was the most important part of the drabble. ;o)

on 2004-12-08 12:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] amejisuto.livejournal.com
Whoot! These are just damn great luv! I'm with everyone else, that future one is really interesting. Then again I'd love to see the aftermath of Xander being turned.

on 2004-12-09 03:02 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Hee! *smooch* Ta!

I'd love to see more of the futureflash one too. ::gets on knees to the muse:: It just kinda came out of knowhere. I was trying to move the boys into the future so show they were still together after the passage of time and... suddenly they were in tunnels and o.o. *g*

on 2004-12-08 12:59 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] umbralillium.livejournal.com
*bounces* Yay! Darkhavens drabbles! *cough* Yeah, comments...

All very lovely. Loved The Gift of Time, so much pain in something so short. *pets the bois*

on 2004-12-09 03:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
*bounces* Yay! Darkhavens drabbles!

::preens::

Thank you! 'The Gift of Time' was going to be called 'Too Late', but it sounded too final and death-ficcy. *g* I had to have Spike saving Xander, or at least trying to. :o)

on 2004-12-08 01:30 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com
A real first time, pierced nipples, a dying plea and, of course, the entirety of the last one... I love you.

Wonderful and intriguing!

on 2004-12-09 03:06 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
*smooch* Ta!

Yes, a real first time. Comeplete with ums and ers and ows. *g* The pierced nipples happened because I needed that para to be longer, but they fit perfectly. And the last one came out of nowhere. I still have no idea of any backstory, but I'm hoping...

on 2004-12-08 01:39 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_beetle_/
Okay, you cannot stop there! Not with this cool - cave-dwellers, underground, futuristic - AWESOME thing you have going on!

You. Suck.

But the drabbles rule.

on 2004-12-09 03:12 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Okay, you cannot stop there! Not with this cool - cave-dwellers, underground, futuristic - AWESOME thing you have going on!

Hee! If I had more, I'd write it, because it reeled me in too, but I don't know any more! My muse gave me that tiny spoonful and then hid the rest away somewhere. I need to find a bribe for her that will work. ;o)

*smooch*

Ta!

on 2004-12-08 06:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vampirefever.livejournal.com
I just love your drabbles and these were excellent.
I also want to know the full story behind the last one.
::bats eyelashes::

on 2004-12-09 03:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I just love your drabbles and these were excellent.

*smooch* Ta!

I also want to know the full story behind the last one. ::bats eyelashes::

Oh, so do I! My muse only saw fit to gift we with this tiny snippet and it's got me going nutso trying to find out more!

on 2004-12-08 06:11 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Ahhhhhhh!
Very cool.
:)
*bounce*
And, want MORE of course, of that future bit. Just a bit more.
*measures with fingers*
Tiny bit.
K?
k.

on 2004-12-09 03:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thankee!

And, want MORE of course, of that future bit. Just a bit more.
*measures with fingers*
Tiny bit.
K?
k.


Oh, so would I! The muse gave me that tiny snippet and then... poof! Gone. I'm trying to lure her back with toblerone and jamaican ginger sponge but she's being difficult.
Rest assured,if I get more I will share. ;o)

on 2004-12-09 04:00 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (minkmittens)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Wheeeeeee!!!
Yes!
*see icon*
As an encouragement....

on 2004-12-09 04:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
LOL! That icon rocks!

on 2004-12-10 01:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
wheeee! I got the Mink Mitten of Lurve!
*smooches you*
I hope that encourages the muse to provide more details. *g*

on 2004-12-10 07:02 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Oh, me too!
*bounce*

on 2004-12-08 07:19 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_sharvie_/
Oh, that was so gorgeous! I so want to know the whole story! Maybe I'm just not cut out for drabbles. I must have more! Please. *bats eyelashes*

But wow the emotions you produce with only a few words! *bows*

on 2004-12-09 03:28 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! :o)

And if my muse will give me more of the futureflash story I will certainly share. At the moment she's hoarding it, but I am trying every bribe available. ;o)

on 2004-12-08 10:56 am (UTC)
ext_11979: (Puss in boots by killmebecomeme)
Posted by [identity profile] suki-blue.livejournal.com
Bloody fantastic, all of them. I'm very intrigued by Futureflash. Write more? Puurrrlleeaaseee?

on 2004-12-09 03:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Bloody fantastic, all of them.

::curtsies:: Thankee!

And belive me, I'm intrigued too! My muse only gave me that tiny peek into that universe. I'm trying to wangle more out of her. ;o)

on 2004-12-08 12:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] reddwarf75.livejournal.com
U're so good! *pets u lovingly*
Marie

on 2004-12-09 03:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
::purrs at the petting::

Fankoo!

on 2004-12-08 06:23 pm (UTC)
ext_1234: (Default)
Posted by [identity profile] sufie58.livejournal.com
I'm not a great fan of drabbles - if they're good, I always want to know more. These were lovely and more would definitely be of the good. thank you

on 2004-12-09 03:35 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you!

I'm trying to pry more details of the futureflash one out of my muse but she's being contrary. Whatever I manage to get I will certainly share. ;o)

on 2004-12-08 07:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] murielle.livejournal.com
The Gift of Time nearly killed me! Well, until the end. ;-)

Beautiful series! Wonderfully drawn, lovingly crafted. Beautiful work!

on 2004-12-09 03:37 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you. :o)

'The Gift of Time' was nearly called 'Too Late'... but I just couldn't do that to my boys. *g* So, Xander got to come back for another drabble. ;o)

on 2004-12-09 06:37 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] xandercordy1.livejournal.com
I have to agree with everyone else. I would love to read more about their future together, working with Angel. While Futureflash was intriguing, The Gift of Time was so heart wrenching, First Time was very sweet, but I have to say my favorite part was Seconds to Spare. Loved the way Buffy snuck up on Spike as he was bragging to Xander about his vampire senses. So very Spikish.

on 2004-12-10 02:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yeah, Buffy was trying to catch them making out, but Spike's too sneaky. *g*

on 2004-12-09 10:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] crazydiamondsue.livejournal.com
Loved these! And yeah, I'm jumping on the Futureflash bandwagon. I wanna know why they aren't Topside anymore. I also loved First Time - you always get me with the realism. *wonders if a drabble queen crown of construction paper, glitter and paste would fit into your fic card?*

on 2004-12-10 02:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
*wonders if a drabble queen crown of construction paper, glitter and paste would fit into your fic card?*

Hee! If you send it, I will wear it. *g*

Believe me, I'm itching to know more about the Futureflash story too. The muse is being stubborn. the bitch.

I just couldn't resist the realism for First Time. I could see it so clearly...

*smooch*

on 2004-12-09 10:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] leni-ba.livejournal.com
The first is one of your best so far. So adorable. Loved the second too, heh, funny!

on 2004-12-10 02:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
The first is one of your best so far.

Thank you! I could see them being so awkward but determined. :o)

And Buffy so wanted to see them together in the second one. And she nearly did!

on 2004-12-10 04:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rubyblushu.livejournal.com
I really liked these. "The Gift of Time" was heart-wrenching, despite it's short length. And you managed to intrigue us w/ "Futureflash" in just a few words.

on 2004-12-10 04:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

Heart-wrenching is what I was going for. *g*

on 2005-01-18 06:17 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (xander_demonmagnet_houses)
Posted by [personal profile] spikedluv
These were wonderful! Loved your description of their first time, and Spike insisting he'd hear Buffy, despite Xander's begging and whimpering. Would adore to see the last one turned into a longer story. *hint hint*

on 2005-01-20 06:19 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Awkward first times are fun to write, especially so sparsely. And that last one has already been added to the 'to-do' list residing in my writing folder. (It keeps growing!) *g*

Thanks again. :o)

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