'Turnabout', one for [community profile] slashthedrabble challenge #43 - Role Reversal

Sep. 17th, 2005 11:55 pm
darkhavens: text icon: 15 m/m pairings in dk purple, with paler txt darkhavens and even paler txt multifandom ho. (mcshep uhoh [literati])
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Author: darkhavens
Title: Turnabout 1/1
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay of Stargate Atlantis
Rating: PG
Words: 300
Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Summary: John and bugs just don't get on


Turnabout

John barely noticed the jewel-coloured insect on his arm, just brushed it off and continued trekking through the woods. He'd grown used to ignoring Rodney's dissertations on how they were going to die, and the running commentary on just how nature could whup their collective ass was one he'd heard a thousand times before, or so it seemed. It took several paces for anything out of the ordinary to register.

Between one footstep and the next, he grew dizzy. Anxiety had him moistening dry lips with a tongue rendered strangely swollen. Breath was suddenly hard to catch, as though he'd taken a well-aimed body blow from one of Teyla's sticks. The trees around him twirled and dipped, sending jagged rays of crystalline bright light into his eyes. He chose to believe that that was why he stumbled.

Rodney was there before he ignominiously hit the ground, muttering dire predictions and laying the blame squarely at John's traitorous feet.

"You'd think, with your prior experience, you'd know not to mess with indigenous lifeforms. How many times have we listened to Carson's lectures on the subject? At least this time you're the one in trouble instead of me."

But even as Rodney gloated and nagged and lectured about John's idiocy, he was smoothly checking for signs of anaphylaxis, and he found them.

With a muted mutter that John was wasting medication meant for him, Rodney produced and used an EpiPen on one strong thigh. And if Rodney's helping hand lingered longer than it should have, and maybe a little too close to his groin, John didn't see any reason to complain. He was much too relieved, at feeling his apprehension fade, at being able to take a full, deep breath instead of shallow pants, to remind the resident genius to be discreet.

on 2005-09-17 11:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rayne-y-daze.livejournal.com
Wonderful! You really captured the off-kilter panic in this - and the closing? Lovely.

on 2005-09-19 03:42 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

I've felt that panic and that shortness of breath so I felt confident in writing John experiencing them. Scary stuff, but Rodney was there to save the day and cop a feel so all was well. :D

on 2005-09-17 11:23 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
ooh! bug!john :D

...and trust Rodney to cop a feel ;)

on 2005-09-19 03:43 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I am so going to write a real bug!John fic once I've seen the ep (a few dozen times). I love the caps I've seen of him and I really think there's a damn good story to be written there. :D

Thanks sweetie! *smooch*

on 2005-09-17 11:26 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] toniabarone.livejournal.com
Oh no! Poor John. But at least Rodney was there for him! I liked this little peak into their lives. Thanks for sharing.

on 2005-09-19 03:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! John was never in any real danger with Rodney there to save his hide, but now he knows what it feels like he won't keep winding Rodney up quite so much. *g*

on 2005-09-18 12:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com
Great use of the theme and so like Rodney ::g::

on 2005-09-19 03:47 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Rodney is all bluster and hot air but he does what he has to. And cops a feel when he gets the chance, of course. *g*

on 2005-09-18 01:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] teza.livejournal.com
Your summary is the best ever. :D John and his bugs -- poor boy!

on 2005-09-19 03:48 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
LOL! Thanks!

there really wasn't another summary I could make. It's all about John and his bad luck with the bugs. *g*

on 2005-09-18 03:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com
Rodney of the face that tells all would have a hard time being discreet, I think.

This was lovely with the seemingly off-handed but very determined care of teh McKay for his Colonel. :)

on 2005-09-19 03:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

Rodney just has his default mode set at bluster and complain but he always gets the job done. Plus, he got a chance to grope a little so he was quite willing to play doctor. *g*

on 2005-09-18 10:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bluespirit-star.livejournal.com
Ah, a very neat little role reversal.
Lovely - thank you. :-)

on 2005-09-19 03:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! Rodney would never give up the chance to be able to say 'Now do you understand why I worry so much?!' *g*

on 2005-09-19 02:46 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
Nicely done!LOL! And yes,I can see Rodney snarking as he cops a fell and saves John's life all at the same time!*G*!

on 2005-09-19 03:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! Rodney can multi-task with the best of them. ;)

on 2005-09-20 11:08 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (mckay_gettingsome_chelle)
Posted by [personal profile] spikedluv
Love Rodney to the rescue, with a lecture, of course, and copping a feel. *snicker*

on 2005-09-21 06:05 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! Rodney is never one to miss an opprtunity, be it for a lecture or a grope. *g*

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