'Sometimes', one for [community profile] slashthedrabble challenge #38 - Wings

Aug. 14th, 2005 01:59 am
darkhavens: text icon: 15 m/m pairings in dk purple, with paler txt darkhavens and even paler txt multifandom ho. (shep intense passion [literati])
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Author: darkhavens
Title: Sometimes
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard of Stargate: Atlantis
Rating: NC-17
Words: 400
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Summary: Rodney has his own fallen angel



Sometimes

Sometimes, when Rodney's been awake for seventy-two straight hours, he wonders if John might be a fallen angel sent to tease and please him. He's sure in certain lights, from certain angles, he can see the wings. The faintest smoke grey shadows, sweeping out and up behind that hair, tapering to blackened dusty points behind his heels.

The fancy resurrects itself at unexpected moments.

While fleeing for their lives towards the gate he's sure he sees them - a darker mass of air extending out on either side. This planet's people's version of a small projectile weapon spits out rocks the size of acorns, but with carefully tailored barbs. He hears the whistle-thunk that should mean injury, or worse, and then he hears it several times again. Yet still they run, uninjured, from the latest botched up mission, and while he knows it doesn't really make him any safer, seeing the wings helps dial the panic down a notch or two.

He sees them later too, though in wildly different circumstances - riding John to heaven's edge and back a second time. They're slicksweatshivershake alive and whole and home and everything else is quickly put aside until they're done and sated.

They're close now, riding the razor's edge at the point of no return, and Rodney knows John won't allow him to ease them back again. He's done it twice before already - pinned John to the bed, and slowed their frenzied writhing, gentled him, until the urge to come has loosed its grip.

But now it's time. He's curled right over, knees stuck out at awkward knobbly angles, much too happy with the chest to belly contact the position grants to think of trying to make himself look graceful, if he could. John's hands are in his hair, on his shoulders, roaming, stroking, pulling, scrabbling for skin and quick release. Rodney licks a path between his nipples and bites down, clings tightly as he arches, screams and comes.

And there they are, visible from the corners of his eyes, two ash grey shadows rising from the bed to cross behind him, enveloping them both as focus shifts and breathing stills. And then he's clenching, coming, whiting out and falling forward. When his eyes reopen they are gone.

In the light of day, when they're relatively safe, he knows it's just a fantasy he has - his own fallen angel. But sometimes, late at night, he wonders...

on 2005-08-14 01:15 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (M/S 3)
Posted by [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
They're slicksweatshivershake alive and whole and home and everything else is quickly put aside until they're done and sated.

Wow, that line is very evocative of cummings, and the whole thing is just lovely.

on 2005-08-17 04:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love the way cummings bends the language to his own will. he inspires several of the writers in my first fandom (Buffy) and I think I picked up the style, and the cummings-appreciation from them. He's contagious. *g*

on 2005-08-14 01:24 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com
And there they are, visible from the corners of his eyes, two ash grey shadows rising from the bed to cross behind him, enveloping them both as focus shifts and breathing stills. And then he's clenching, coming, whiting out and falling forward. When his eyes reopen they are gone.

I loved the visual I got of John's wings enfolding Rodney. The image of John as a Fallen Angel just fits so well.

Loved this.

on 2005-08-17 04:09 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! I think John would make a great fallen angel - he's not evil, he's just naughty. And he'd look so damn hot with those wings. ;)

on 2005-08-14 01:32 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] karendreamer.livejournal.com
OH, I happily worship you. That is so very beautiful.

on 2005-08-17 04:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D

on 2005-08-14 01:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com
*bows* Beautiful.

on 2005-08-17 04:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks. *curtsies*

on 2005-08-14 02:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] clarkangel.livejournal.com
This is a truly gorgeous fic

on 2005-08-17 04:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D

on 2005-08-14 03:11 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Dude!!
Oh, i like.
And there they are, visible from the corners of his eyes, two ash grey shadows rising from the bed to cross behind him, enveloping them both as focus shifts and breathing stills.

Pretty pretty pretty.
:)

on 2005-08-17 04:12 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! And here I thought I'd never write wing!fic. *g*

on 2005-08-17 04:24 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
*snerk*
Wing!Fic!
:)

on 2005-08-17 04:27 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Well, there's already centaur!John fic and penguin!fic and mutant!John/mutant!Rodney fic, ooh not to mention vampire!John fic, so... *g*

And damn, he looks good with wings! ;)

on 2005-08-17 12:10 pm (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Ack! Centaur? OMG.
*runs screaming*

on 2005-08-14 03:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ex-kyrieane267.livejournal.com
*curls up on your feet and purrrrs*

This is so very beautiful.

on 2005-08-15 12:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] writeaholic.livejournal.com
Dude! I want to do impure things to your icon!!!!

on 2005-08-17 04:13 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! ^^^pets you^^^

on 2005-08-14 03:42 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rayne-y-daze.livejournal.com
Beautiful, and I love the illusory wings. This really speaks to how he feels about John. Bravo.

on 2005-08-17 04:16 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks. :D

I think they both have amazing faith that the other one will do what's necessary. Rodney with fix what's necessary, and John will protect. Plus, the picture in my head, of John with smoky grey, black-tipped wings, is just too damn hot not to share. *g*

on 2005-08-14 06:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] virtualpersonal.livejournal.com
Shep as an angel! Now see, until I read this, I'd definitely have voted *devil* Nice job showing us the truth about him. Oh wait... fallen angel, kinda fits both theories!

on 2005-08-17 04:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
He's not wicked enough to be a devil, he's just naughty. *g*

Thanks!

on 2005-08-14 07:35 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] claire.livejournal.com
Beautiful.

on 2005-08-17 04:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks. :D

on 2005-08-14 06:11 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] moimoietmoi.livejournal.com
Ooh, pretty!

on 2005-08-17 04:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! :D

on 2005-08-14 07:02 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hopeowl.livejournal.com
Ok, you've done it again! I keep sending you kudos on the McShapp email list, and now I get to do it here too! This is fanfuckingtastic. OMG I love your J/R stuff. Please keep going, you're doing an incredible job.

on 2005-08-17 04:22 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! And thank you for friending me. You're my first official McShep-centric fan. :D

on 2005-08-17 05:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] hopeowl.livejournal.com
What's really odd is that I've been a Spander shipper since around season 3, and somehow I managed to miss all of your fics. I'm remedying that now though. LOL

on 2005-08-17 05:27 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Oh wow! I only discovered the joys of Spander in November 2003, but I fell in love with them 5 minutes into my first fic. Two days later I started writing them. *g*

I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoy writing them. :D

on 2005-08-14 07:57 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mistressmarilyn.livejournal.com
Okay, I'll worship you. Wonderful writing. And a great take on the theme.

on 2005-08-17 04:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! The idea of John with wings was just too pretty to ignore. *g*

on 2005-08-14 08:51 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] samsara-sv.livejournal.com
goergous imagery as ever my dear

on 2005-08-17 04:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks, sweetie. :D

on 2005-08-15 12:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jackie-brown.livejournal.com
This was beautiful - a lovely image.

on 2005-08-17 04:24 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! I had the image in my head - folded arms, cocked hip, wings tucked neatly behind him as he watched Rodney do what Rodney does. *g*

on 2005-08-18 12:40 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] remey.livejournal.com
oh now that is beautiful...

on 2006-04-17 02:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

(And wow, I really can't believe I missed replying to this for so long. I hate it when the comment emails don't come like they're supposed to. I always wonder what i've missed, and see - this!

;)

on 2006-04-17 03:03 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] remey.livejournal.com
its okay :D

on 2006-04-09 05:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] out-there.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Beautiful, sweet and very, very hot. I really enjoyed it.

on 2006-04-17 02:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I think John would make a wonderful fallen angel. It might even explain the hair - millenia of halo displacement!

on 2008-07-08 03:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] outsideth3box.livejournal.com
No!

Look, I'm saying no, and I mean it. Err...meant it. Right up until I read it and you made me all wibbly from the awww.

**glares**

If you weren't so good at this writing thing, I'd have to take you over my knee. **looks stern**

on 2008-07-08 03:59 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Hee! Promises, promises. *g*

Thank you, darlin'!

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