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Author: darkhavens
Title: Swings and Roundabouts, 1/7
Pairing: Dean/Sam
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG-13 for now
Words: 407
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] stagesoflove 2006, Round 3, 'Seven Deadly Sins' and 'Seven Heavenly Virtues', #1 Pride // Faith.
Also posted here.


Pride // Faith

Everything's going great - until the second black dog appears out of nowhere.

With one swipe of a paw the size of a dinner plate, it knocks Dean into the corner of a badly crumbling crypt.

Dean feels a wrenching pop as his arm is tugged free of its socket. His shotgun, still fully loaded with rock salt, falls to the ground from suddenly slack, nerveless fingers.

"Dean! Stay down!"

And Dean does. He doesn't even think about disobeying that voice, for all that Sam's only been doing this on a regular basis again for a few short months.

"I can do it, Dean!"

Sam is adamant - not that Dean is arguing, but Sam's still relearning how to trust himself in situations like this - and if the gun wobbles, it's only for an instant. Then it's steady as a rock again, cocked and ready, aimed square between the glowing eyes of the fast approaching hound.

Dean cradles his dislocated arm to his chest and watches the massive beast bound ever closer to his brother.

He sees the hours - the years - of regular practice in Sam's almost perfect stance. Remembers tapping knees and elbows into position with his father's training stick; tugging shoulders back and down until Sammy stopped curling himself around the weapon of the moment, setting himself up to suffer the bone-deep bruises of uncontrolled recoil. Happy times.

The sound of a second shot merges with the first, so close together they almost sound like one. But the dog jerks twice before it drops like a stone, just one short stride away from Dean's own earlier kill.

Dean feels the warm glow of pride for a job well done, though he's unsure whether it's for the death of the dogs or the extra hours he spent on Sam's training after Dad threw up his hands in disgust.

He decides it's both.

"Dude, nice shooting! I knew you could do it. Hell, you were trained by the best."

And if Sam isn't quite as gentle as he might have been, helping to put Dean's shoulder back into place, Dean doesn't mention it. He's still revelling in the heated look he'd got for his teasing, and the muttered threats of retribution Sam is tossing his way as he salts and burns the twin bloated canine corpses.

It sounds to Dean like corporal punishment is on this evening's playtime agenda. He can live with that.


Gluttony // Temperance



on 2006-05-22 04:16 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] exitosus.livejournal.com
Nice start. Can't wait for more [:

on 2006-06-26 04:32 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! I hope the others live up to expectations. :D

Only one left to go now!

on 2006-05-22 05:14 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] katbcoll.livejournal.com
It sounds to Dean like corporal punishment is on this evening's playtime agenda.
*snickers* Someone's getting a spanking!

Great job! I was wondering how you were going to deal with both the sins and the virtues. Cool stuff!

on 2006-06-26 04:34 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Does that mean I get a spanking off Sammy too? *g*)

To be honest, I meant to write the sins and virtues as separate sets, and then one of the insane gremlins masquerading as muses in my head whispered that it would be much more of a challenge to pair the sins and virtues up and write one piece for each pair. *headdesk* :D

Thank you!

on 2006-06-26 04:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] katbcoll.livejournal.com
and that insane gremlin/muse gets a cookie!

So so late catching up on feedback. Does that mean I get a spanking off Sammy too?
*laughs* I'm sure he'd love it as much as you, sweetie.

on 2006-06-26 04:48 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Don't encourage the gremlins! I'm trying to corral them into synchronised musing right now. I have a crossover due for a ficathon on Friday and less than 1000 words written so far. *flails*

Why do my muses wait until the deadline is this -> <- close before getting to work? They live to torture me!

*waits for Sammy to appear*
*hopes he knows he can bring Dean too...*

on 2006-05-22 04:20 pm (UTC)
tabaqui: (s&doutsidebygigglingkat)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Whaaahuh?
Corporal...punishment....
Yis.
*ahem*
Wheee!

on 2006-06-26 04:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Profuse apologies!)

Corporal punishment between consenting adults is always... sumfinksumfink. *brain melts* :D

Thanks!

on 2006-05-22 05:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com
salavating, need more

on 2006-06-26 04:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Profuse apologies!)

Thank you! I hope the later parts have fed your appetite for more. ;)

on 2006-05-22 07:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] alistra.livejournal.com
You wrote! *dances*

It's really nice - isn't it always? :D

on 2006-06-26 04:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Profuse apologies!)

Thank you! :D

Wrote more today too. *bounces*

on 2006-07-02 04:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] alistra.livejournal.com
Yay!

I have to catch up on your fic, I really am suffering from withdrawal. Just imagine, no Jensen or Dean for DAYS! I don't even have any pics printed. I didn't see so much as one picture!!! *is faint*

On the other hand, I will surely appreciate the slash even more now. ;)

on 2006-07-03 05:27 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
DAYS? *trembles at the thought*

Welcome back to the World of Slash! *g*

on 2006-07-03 05:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] alistra.livejournal.com
Thank you - I feel much better already!

Haven't caught up to Swings and Roundabouts yet but I will once it's finished. Already looking forward to it! :D

*HUGS*

on 2006-07-03 05:33 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
It should have been finished last night, but stuff happened. But it's on its way later today! :D

on 2006-07-03 05:34 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] alistra.livejournal.com
HOORAY!!!! *dances you around*

on 2006-05-23 04:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kk-d.livejournal.com
Me likes... Yiss me does!

MWA

Kk

on 2006-06-26 04:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Profuse apologies!)

Thank you, sweetie! *smooch*

*watches icon for an hour*

Yeah, I watch for the... plot too. ;)

on 2006-05-25 11:42 pm (UTC)
mf_luder_xf: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] mf_luder_xf
Heh. *evil grin*

Yay for more SPN fics from you. I love them so much.

on 2006-06-26 04:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Profuse apologies!)

Thank you! I love writing them. Only one more to go in this series. *sniffles* Whatever will I do next? ;)

on 2006-06-26 05:25 am (UTC)
mf_luder_xf: (SPN evil!Sam)
Posted by [personal profile] mf_luder_xf
Write more Wincest, of course!! *VBG*

on 2006-06-26 05:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Now there's an idea worthy of merit! *g*

on 2006-05-28 09:41 am (UTC)
ext_6732: (kali_sama-dean-plot)
Posted by [identity profile] kitty-poker1.livejournal.com
Happy times.

And more on the way, by the sounds of it. Lucky Dean. ;)

on 2006-06-26 04:54 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
(So so late catching up on feedback. Profuse apologies!)

Plenty plenty more! They're both lucky boys - look who they get to spend all that time with! *g*

Thank you, sweetie! *smooch*

on 2006-05-31 05:54 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
It sounds to Dean like corporal punishment is on this evening's playtime agenda.

YAY! ::gets the popcorn::

on 2006-06-26 04:55 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Hee! h0r! *misses and smishes you*

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