'Fundamentally Altered', 3/5 for stagesoflove R2 - Arousal, #2 Plateau of Arousal

[darkhavens]

Author: darkhavens
Title: Fundamentally Altered, 3/5
Pairing: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: NC-17 overall
Words: 321
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Graphic Wincest
Summary: Repeated near-death experience would affect us all.
Notes: Written for stagesoflove 2006, Round 2, 'Five Stages of Sexual Arousal', stage #3 - Plateau of Arousal.
Also posted here.
Stage #1 - Desire, stage #2 - Excitement.




It's fast and furious, hunger raw like open wounds; every touch burns and scourges, cleans and purifies. There's nothing left but need and now, the base imperative to rut, to fuck, to totally consume and be consumed. It's insane, and you don't give a damn.

There's no time for naked, that's for later - if there is a later, and you're still not sure of that. There's no time for soft and gentle, tender kisses and caresses, it's a fire beneath your skin, incandescent.

Words are shapeless, harsh amorphous echoes scattering from your mouth and his in fevered gasps. You don't need to hear to understand. You can't bear to pull away to frame them properly.

His tongue's ambrosia on your tongue; his breath's the air that sustains you. His lips are berry ripe and lush, a lure - irresistible - you have to gnaw and suck and taste. He fights to do the same to you.

Hands are everywhere - ass and hair and jaw and groin, grasping, pulling, cradling, teasing. Too much, and still not enough.

Boots knock together, digging in to find the perfect spot, the optimum point of leverage - and there it is. Traction. Friction. The press and slide of seam, of zipper, quite unyielding on your cock. The pain is sweet. You return the favor.

You're riding the thigh he's forced between yours as he rubs off on your hipbone, his pelvis butting hard against your own.

You're so close, almost there, and from the stuttering of his breath you know he's right there with you. You could stay like this for hours, and you will do one day soon, but the buzzing in your ears, in your bones, in your soul, tells you this is not the time. You just need something, just the tiniest extra push to send you flying over the edge - freefalling into white space.

"Dean."

"Sam."

And that's enough.


Part Four

Comments

[tabaqui]

Ooooooooh...so damn pretteh. Dude.
Yis.

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Writing these is such a rush! I may have to try second person POV again soon because it's much more immediate and visceral, at least for me. It's almost personal. :D

[tabaqui]

It's cool, dude.
Just....more!
:)

[literati.livejournal.com]

::is in a happy place::

♥

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Hee! *is there with you* :D
*shares the popcorn*

[acostilow.livejournal.com]

You know, I love your fics. I adore them. I have to read them again and again because there's just so much in what you write, levels upon levels.

I love your fics.

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Wow. Thank you! I always get an extra-special buzz from hearing about rereads. To me that's the ultimate sign that the fic works and isn't immediately forgotten once that comment button is clicked.

*bounces*

[lady-shain.livejournal.com]

You blow me away. There's the hot; yes, but so much more: the care, the craftmanship, the attention to detail. The way that the words flow into each other, creating a rhythm; painting a flawless image in the mind.

Just..wow.

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

That flow comes from reading the piece aloud again and again to make sure the rhythm and cadence works properly. If I tweak a phrasing or replace a word, it gets read out again so I can hear how it's changed. Sometimes swapping out one word for another means I have to rephrase the whole sentence so the syllable stresses still fall in the right places.

It's very fulfilling to hear that it works, that it reads the way I want it to. :D

[mf_luder_xf]

Perfect, perfect. Your work is like poetry.

As usual, I'm dying for more. Fantastic job.

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

More is on the way very very soon. And it's time for the Big 'O'. :D

[quietdiscerning.livejournal.com]

mmmmhmmmm. that was sizzling. very very nice.

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It nearly burned my fingertips off typing it. :D

[alistra.livejournal.com]

Holy shit. Guh!

How do you manage to stun me all over again with each new fic you post? Isn't there a law against such things?!

Or maybe I just shouldn't read this here at my parents's house for the hoidays, so very far from my Hero's bones, unable to jump them. *whimpers*

Damn that was hot!

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

How do you manage to stun me all over again with each new fic you post? Isn't there a law against such things?!

Ah, but if there was a law against it, it would just make it that much sweeter and wrong and even hotter! *g*

Thank you!

Ah, parents, what can you do with them? My mother is coming for a visit the week after next and wants to read some of this writing I keep telling her about. That's gonna be fun. :D

[alistra.livejournal.com]

*LOL* Oh yeah that reaction I'd like to see. :D

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Oh, she knows I'm a slasher, and she agrees that Spike and Xander make a very pretty couple.

Since I last saw her, I've spread my wings to include SGA and Supernatural, and I've also written hot porny fic. I have to decide what to show her, and whether it's worth the effort to introduce her to McKay/Sheppard via selected episodes, or if I should stick with Spike/Xander and Sam/Dean. That last one's a no-brainer - she was a Jensen Ackles fan before I was, so I recently discovered. She actually asked me what had taken me so long. *g*

[alistra.livejournal.com]

*lol* Well if that's the case... :)

I've never seen SGA so I can't comment on that. As for Mums... Mine told me recently, during the umpteenth time of watching Pirates of the Caribbean, that she doesn't agree with me on the OBVIOUS slash between Captain Jack Sparrow and Will Turner. (I mean come on, that's not even subtext! That's TEXT! *lol*)

No, she said it was quite clear that Jack was doing Norrington. O.O

I almost fell off the couch. :D

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

ROFL!

I tend to see Jack/Will too but I have friends who swear by (and write) Jack/Norrington (Sparrington!).

If you like a show with subtext to spare (there's an entire episode where Rodney acts like a jealous lover because John is flirting with an alien goddess), and vampires (okay so they're space vampires which look like gothic catfish and they feed through the palm of their hand, but hey, vampires!), then SGA is worth a look. ;)

[alistra.livejournal.com]

I don't think they show that over here...

*coughas if that stopped me from watching Supernaturalcough*

I have to ask this blatantly stupid question: SGA is Stargate Atlantis? *squints and waits to be mocked*

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

SGA is indeed Stargate Atlantis. And while they are showing it over here, they were much too slow about getting a hold of it, so I... improvised. *g*

And there will be no teasing - I've had to ask similar questions of other fandoms. *g*

[alistra.livejournal.com]

Yeah, improvising... *g*

I can't wait for Supernaturalk to come out on DVD. Isn't that odd? It's not even finished its first season!

Speaking of unsinished first seasons, have you seen Firefly?

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Oh GOD!! But never enough for me... This is a wonderful set of ficlets!! Keep them coming!! Keep them coming!!

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Oh they're definitely gonna be coming - the next part is the Big 'O'. *snerk*

Thanks! :D

[kitty-poker1.livejournal.com]

Oh, yes!!! There's nothing in the world like a bit of hot, hard, non-thinky rutting and you've described it perfectly. *thud*

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

Thanks again! *g*

Mindless rutting is so much fun to write. Especially when you can skip the step-by-step descriptions and just go for the grunting and grinding. :D