'Alien Jelly Made Them Do It', 1/5, McShep for [community profile] stagesoflove R2 - Stages of Arousal

Mar. 28th, 2006 10:03 pm
darkhavens: text icon: 15 m/m pairings in dk purple, with paler txt darkhavens and even paler txt multifandom ho. (mcshep make us [literati])
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Author: darkhavens
Title: Alien Jelly Made Them Do It, 1/5
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Rating: NC-17 overall
Words: 364
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Summary: Alien Jelly Made Them Do It
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] stagesoflove 2006, Round 2, 'Five Stages of Sexual Arousal', challenge #1 - Desire.
Also posted here.




"Tonight we eat and embrace; tomorrow we talk trade."

Deceptively simple words that no one even thought twice about before digging into the meat and fruit and strangely shaped vegetables heaped on the low-lying tables in the centre of the hall.

Sitting cross-legged on the floor, Rodney was soon muttering sotto voce plans to introduce the populace of Planet 'It's Good for the Posture' to the concept of cushions, and maybe even non-floor-level seating arrangements.

John listened and nodded and ate, and occasionally knocked knees with Rodney if the man was getting too loud and attracting attention.

And then they served dessert - red, blue, green, yellow, purple and white die-sized cubes of a cloudy, seed-dotted jelly. Rodney, of course, made John try one of each colour to test for citrus before he lifted the first one to his mouth and bit down.

"Oh! Oh… Oh, wow! These are… This is… Mmm!" A second, third, fourteenth, fifteenth cube disappeared into Rodney's mouth to the accompaniment of highly sexual noises.

John squirmed, and tried not to be too obvious about watching his teammate's lips and tongue savouring the gelatinous fruity dessert. He tried to ignore the moans and whimpers of near orgasmic delight that targeted his cock with skilful sinful fingers.

He didn't know how long he'd been staring at Rodney's crooked smile before he realised that Rodney was staring back at him, eyes glazed and hungry.

"Colonel?"

John blinked lazily and cocked a single eyebrow. "Rodney?"

Rodney's hand landed heavily on John's knee and squeezed tightly, the nervous tremor in his fingers barely visible to the naked eye.

"Colonel, I think… The cubes, they… drugged… in-inhibitions lowered and… Aw, screw it!"

The hand on John's knee tightened further and another wrapped firmly around the nape of his neck, pulling him into an awkward, open-mouthed kiss. John spared a single second to wonder what Teyla and Ronon were making of the evening's events before tumbling eagerly into Rodney's embrace.

They were forced apart endless moments later by the need for oxygen. They remained as close as possible, legs entangled, foreheads pressed together as they gasped and fought the urge to rut in public.

"Hut. Now."


Part two





on 2006-03-28 09:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com
OOoOOO! ::fans self:: That's, for lack of a better word, quite yummy. Can't wait for the next bits!

on 2006-04-16 06:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

You know, I think this is the first truly graphic McShep I've written. I've written R/J sex before but it's been almost incidental. Tis fun! :D

on 2006-04-16 11:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com
I'm working on my first graphic slash that happens to be McShep, 'tis very fun. Grar!

on 2006-04-16 11:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Ooh, I look forward to reading it! :D

on 2006-04-16 11:26 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com
It will be my third McShep ever! I'm really enjoying writing them. I'm getting more plotty bunnies than I've gotten for anyone in a loooong time.

on 2006-04-16 11:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I know! There's so much interaction in canon - and so much subtext. They're a joy to play with. Have fun! :D

on 2006-03-28 09:25 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kharma2815.livejournal.com
I have this sudden craving for jelly for some strange reason, can't imagine why. *g*

Next part soon, right?

on 2006-04-16 06:49 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I had to go and dig through my kitchen to find me some jelly after writing this - every part of it! It's addictive. *g*

Thanks!

on 2006-03-28 09:26 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] piratepurple.livejournal.com
Hooray for alien jelly!!!!!

on 2006-04-16 06:49 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Amen to that! Thankee. :D

on 2006-03-28 09:39 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] looking4tarzan.livejournal.com
wibble

hot monkey sex yes?

on 2006-04-16 06:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Yes indeed. Part 4 tonight - 'Orgasm' o.O

Thankee!

Hee!!

on 2006-03-28 10:17 pm (UTC)
ext_834: (Joss & Martin on crack)
Posted by [identity profile] krysalys.livejournal.com
Delectable! For some reason I first thought of jello shots, and then those melt-in-your-mouth mints with the jelly center. Mmmm... *smacks lips*

Even sweeter would be tackling two particular men and having our wicked, wicked ways with them, hrm? Or at the very least getting to actually watch them go at it! *hums happily*
So... where's the next part? *bounces*
----}-@

Re: Hee!!

on 2006-04-16 06:53 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I always want jelly, or jello - or jam! - when i've finished a chapter of this. *g*

More later tonight! :D

on 2006-03-28 10:35 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] claudiasharon.livejournal.com
*gets a jar of jelly* Yum. *giggle*

I liked this fic...it made me happy. :D Write more! Hehe.

on 2006-04-16 06:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Hee! That's the same reaction I have after every chapter - jelly lust! *g*

Thank you. There is mmore on the way later tonight. Chapter 4 already!

on 2006-04-16 07:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] claudiasharon.livejournal.com
*g*

Sweet!

on 2006-03-28 11:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
Rodney, of course, made John try one of each colour to test for citrus before he lifted the first one to his mouth and bit down.

::snorfles::

Lovely, though I would have preferred they did rut in public. ;)

on 2006-04-16 06:55 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thankee darlin'! Rutting in public? Maybe next time. ;)

on 2006-03-28 11:31 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (mcshep_touch_chelle)
Posted by [personal profile] spikedluv
OMG, alien jelly!! And rutting! I love my cracked fandom. *vbg*

on 2006-04-16 06:57 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

In some meta I read earlier in the week, SGA was described as 'a drunken luau' of a fandom. I can live with that. *g*

on 2006-03-29 12:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
Alien jelly fic is cultural significant but sadly overlooked until now. ....and thank heavens you’re writing it. *g*

on 2006-04-16 07:01 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you! *g*

on 2006-03-29 02:58 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] libra-traveller.livejournal.com
I am very happy that this is only the beginning. Waits happily for the sex in the hut. Will there later be them trying to blame it on the jelly when we all know they're actually meant to be together?

on 2006-04-16 07:03 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Oh, I'm certain there will be some sort of jelly-centric discussion before it's all over. ;)

on 2006-03-29 03:38 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
heeeee! Alien jello!

on 2006-04-16 07:04 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Everyone should try some! It's citrus-free! :D

Thanks. ;)

on 2006-03-29 05:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
*snicker* I love 'aliens made them do it' fic!

on 2006-04-16 07:04 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! (Me too. It's like crack, but better for the skin. *g*)

on 2006-03-29 11:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lishel_fracrium.livejournal.com
guh...*whimpers* more,please?

on 2006-04-16 07:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! Part 4 up later tonight. It's orgasm time!

on 2006-03-30 04:19 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Uh-oh. I can see where this is going.

YAY! More!

on 2006-04-16 07:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

More later tonight!

on 2006-03-31 05:29 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
*snerk*
Alien Jell-O!
Whooooooot!
:)

on 2006-04-16 07:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thankee! :D

on 2006-04-01 08:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
Oh yeah!! Leave it to Rodney to find other uses for that talented mouth!! That man can't hold his dessert, lol!!

Awesome, honey!

on 2006-04-16 07:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
It's such a quirky talented mouth. *g*

Thanks!

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