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Author: darkhavens
Title: A Good Night For Hunting
Fandom: Pairing: Buffy: Spike/Xander
Rating: PG
Words: 201
Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com. If you spot a typo, please feel free to tell me in comments. I want you to!
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Vamp!Xander.
Summary: Spike marvels at his own creation.
Notes: Written for challenge #33 - 'Marble' - on my long-neglected Spander Big Damn Table and for [livejournal.com profile] mini_nanowrimo.
Mini-nanowrimo word count: 986


It's been raining for hours. The forest is redolent with the scents of wet earth, rotting vegetation, grass - the copper-iron tang of life.

He stands at the edge of shadow, the moonlight throwing the planes and angles of his face into stark contrast. He's a lethal work of art, a deadly labor of love. A rabbit screams, high-pitched and terrified, and he doesn't even blink.

If he was stripped of the leather and silk and cotton that clings to his skin, he would outshine Michelangelo's David in his pale, marble beauty; a living - though neither live nor breathing - statue, carved from the ruins of a lost, depressed soul. Spike feels real pride in his work.

There are people approaching now, sending up a beacon of laughter and chatter, the stench of too much alcohol and too little sleep, of paper and cheap ink - students. Spike is amazed at how stupid people can be. Despite the recent spate of murders and disappearances, there's always someone who thinks a shortcut through the woods is a good idea.

Xander finally blinks, flashes a gleeful grin in Spike's direction, and steps out onto the path.

It's a good night for hunting.


on 2007-11-03 05:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com
"He's a lethal work of art, a deadly labor of love." Ooh, very, very nice indeed. Shivers happily.

on 2007-11-04 03:02 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I have a special love for vamp!Xander and his sire. *g*

on 2007-11-03 08:36 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] orchidluv.livejournal.com
Lovely dark snippet.

on 2007-11-04 03:02 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

on 2007-11-03 08:42 pm (UTC)
tabaqui: (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui

He stands at the edge of shadow, the moonlight throwing the planes and angles of his face into stark contrast. He's a lethal work of art, a deadly labor of love. A rabbit screams, high-pitched and terrified, and he doesn't even blink.


Preeeeeeeeeeeteh.
Yes.
:)

on 2007-11-04 03:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thankee!

Spike thinks he's preety too. :D

on 2007-11-03 10:19 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] outsideth3box.livejournal.com
::smoochesyoulikewhoa::

Ooooh, that gave me the shivers. Lovely.

I adore Spike's sense of aesthetics.

on 2007-11-04 03:05 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! Spike is an unrepentant aesthete - the pretty matters! *g*

on 2007-11-03 11:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
Very pretty. :)

on 2007-11-04 03:06 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thankee, Pookie! *smooches*

on 2007-11-03 11:34 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/woman_of_/
Xander finally blinks, flashes a gleeful grin in Spike's direction, and steps out onto the path.

Oh yes, Spike has created a hunter, leathal and deadly. He must be so proud of this childe

on 2007-11-04 03:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
He is very proud! And he has reason to be. *g*

Thanks!

on 2007-11-03 11:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mysticsoblivion.livejournal.com
Oh, nice!!!!! So bloody detailed, leaves you chomping at the bit waiting for the next peak at 'Spike's Masterpiece'- gah!

on 2007-11-04 03:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! There are little bits and pieces of backstory floating about in my brain, ut I don't know if I'll ever write them down. maybe. ;)

on 2007-11-04 12:33 am (UTC)
ext_6368: cherry blossoms on a tree -- with my fandom name "EntreNous" on it (buffyverse: Entre dark!Xander)
Posted by [identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com
Yum, dark vamp Xander!

on 2007-11-04 03:12 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

I hadn't played with him for a while and he was getting bored. *g*

on 2007-11-04 12:48 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Very nice. I love the comparison of Vamp!Xander to a work of art.
~Alice~

on 2007-11-04 03:26 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Spike put a lot of time and effort into the renovation adn remodelling job. *g*

on 2007-11-04 01:17 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] txrabbit.livejournal.com
Oh wow. That's stunning. Gorgeous imagery, love!

on 2007-11-04 03:27 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you, darlin'! I just described what 'Spike' was seeing. ;)

on 2007-11-04 08:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] thismaz.livejournal.com
Lovely. I can almost smell that air. And this phrase - He stands at the edge of shadow is so full of magic.
A beautifully crafted piece of sensory description. Full of dark glee and joy. Thank you.

on 2007-11-06 12:13 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

The 'edge of shadow' line was actually the first one i wrote, and the whole thing grew from there. Dark glee describes it perfectly!

on 2007-11-05 12:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] electricalgwen.livejournal.com
A rabbit screams, high-pitched and terrified, and he doesn't even blink.

Beautiful.

on 2007-11-06 12:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

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