'Almost Lost', Sam/Dean, R for [personal profile] kaz2y5 challenge #2

Feb. 1st, 2006 03:56 am
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Author: darkhavens
Title: Almost Lost 1/1
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: R
Words: 537
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Graphic Wincest, biting.
Summary: Sam's kink gets him in trouble of the best kind.
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] kaz2y5 challenge #2.
ETA: This can be viewed as a sequel to my piece 'Mixed Signals', written for the first [livejournal.com profile] kaz2y5 challenge. Everybody said they wanted to see Sam actually get bit. *g*

Almost Lost

They didn't even make it to the back seat of the Impala, let alone the motel they'd checked into thirteen hours before.

The hunger was too strong. The angerfeardread of almost lost you stripped away control, exposing nerves as raw as the claw marks on Dean's chest.

Dean shoved Sam back across the bench seat, not caring when his head bounced off the door handle. Curses, ripe with snatches of a dozen different languages, spilled from Sam's feral slash of grin. Infuriated, Dean grabbed two handfuls of mile-long legs and yanked, toppling Sam onto his back with a triumphant howl.

Frantic, scratched and bleeding hands slammed Sam's knees apart as Dean slid in across the seat to land atop his brother with little grace.

"You stupid, stupid little fuck! What were you thinking? What did I say about not looking the blood-sucking bitch in the eye, Sam?"

Sam bit off whatever excuse he had ready when Dean grabbed a handful of dark curls and bounced his head once, twice, three times off the solid seat.

"Don't -" bounce "- fucking -" bounce "- look!" bounce "Get it now?"

Six feet fives inches of lean, adrenaline-stoked muscle bucked up hard and tried to throw Dean off onto the floor.

Dean clung on tight, one knee sliding up to rest snug against Sam's balls in a silent threat while the other scrabbled to find purchase, a brace against Sam's continued struggles. A lucky kick brought him into contact with the doorframe, providing the leverage needed to push down into Sam's thrusts.

An elbow to the sternum stilled Sam just long enough for Dean to snatch his clawing hands and force them over Sam's head. Suddenly they were eye-to-eye, groin-to-groin, and motionless, with only the sound of harsh, hitching breaths to break the heavy silence.

"She nearly bit you, you - jackass!"

Sam's pulse spiked under Dean's grip tight around his wrist and Dean's eyes widened in disbelief.

"Oh, you gotta be kidding me!"

A dull flush spread like wildfire across Sam's cheeks, down his throat to slip beneath the collar of his shirt. It drew Dean's eyes and tongue to the shadowed hollow between his clavicles. One fast, open-mouthed kiss to that patch of fiery flesh and he was back in Sam's face, more furious than before.

"Tell me you weren't thinking with your dick back there, Sammy. You weren't just gonna let her suck you dry, right?"

Sam's erection twitched so hard it almost broke his zipper.

"Oh, man, you are one sick puppy."

Dean slid down a couple of inches and nudged aside wool and cotton, teeth dragging delicately across Sam's collarbone.

Sam whined.

"Nobody else." Dean nipped the salt slick flesh beneath his tongue and thrust his hips down as Sam bucked. "You got that, Sam? Nobody but me gets to make you this hard."

Snake fast, he turned his head and bit, hard, deep and true. Sam's voice cracked on a scream. He came.

Wave after wave of shuddering pleasure wracked Sam's frame and Dean could only cling on for the ride. Sam's breath was still stuttering in rhythm with his pulse when Dean pulled back and stared at him incredulously.

"Dude, that's not normal."


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on 2006-02-01 04:05 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] elmo-loves-me.livejournal.com
Um...

Homina. Homina homina homina.

That was quite hot. Mmm, I loves me some angry sex!!

on 2006-02-21 09:58 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think these boys have a lot of angry sex. ;)

on 2006-02-01 04:11 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sxeraven.livejournal.com
Bwahahahah! That's great.

Dean would SO be like "dude, that's not normal" even after sex if Sam came just from being bitten.

Totally awesome though. And soveryhot. *fans*

on 2006-02-21 10:03 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Yeah, I think Dean has a skewed and interesting idea of 'normal'. Sex with brother Sammy? Normal. Fighting off bloodsucking critters? Normal. Sammy coming just from being bitten? So not normal! *g*

on 2006-02-01 04:15 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] acostilow.livejournal.com
*laughs* My character did the same thing in my fic. AWESOME.

And this was...this was...

DAMN THIS WAS HOT.

Sam needs to be bitten all the damn time.

on 2006-02-21 10:04 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks! You wrote bitey fic? *hopes for linkage*

Sam is just so very biteable, and Dean looks like a biter to me - i think it's the grin and that naughty glint in his eye.

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on 2006-02-01 04:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] exsequar.livejournal.com
The last line made me burst out laughing. Priceless! Hot and sexy and WRONG, and then just so hilarious. Love it :D

on 2006-02-21 10:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! The Winchester boys always make the wrong seem right. ;)

on 2006-02-01 04:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quietdiscerning.livejournal.com
eeeeeeeeee.

I could HEAR Dean say that. Awesome.

Sam is yummy when he's about the pain.

on 2006-02-21 10:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yeah, Sam hurts so very prettily. *g*

on 2006-02-01 04:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] staceey.livejournal.com
Guh, this was intense and HOT!


And the last bit? "Dude thats not normal" so very Dean. =D

on 2006-02-21 10:09 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! These boys just inspire the hotness. And you know Dean has his own definition of 'normal' that's not in any dictionary. *g*

on 2006-02-01 04:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mneiai.livejournal.com
Loved this. It was hot and steamy and hot and...er...I really am just too distracted by its hot steaminess to come up with other synonyms.

Also, Sam's a sick puppy ^.^

(IE: Loved it, loved Dean's reactions, or, more specifically, Dean's reactions to Sam's reactions...)

on 2006-02-21 10:12 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! These boys are just so hot... ;)

You just know Dean is going to drive Sam nuts with the teasing and biting now too. *g*

on 2006-02-01 05:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] drvsilla.livejournal.com
MmmmM. Serious MmmmmM. Love their tussle and their fire for each other and Sam's kink -- and Dean's various reactions to it. No one but me... Buh.♥

Hot & twisted and the right amount of Dean-concern and Dean-snark, which is a delicious mix.

Hm, come to think of it, so is this fic! Delish!

:D

on 2006-02-21 10:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think Dean is the possessive type. If regular biting is what it takes to stop Sam lusting after their vampy targets, then he'll just keep his pearly whites sharp and ready.

I love snark with an unholy passion, which is why I fell so hard for this fandom. Now I have three pairs of snarky boys to coo over. *g*

on 2006-02-01 05:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] nevcolleil.livejournal.com
*happy sigh*

Oh, yeah.

That's about all I can say right now ;P

on 2006-02-21 10:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Happy sighs are always welcome fb. ;)

on 2006-02-01 07:55 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] staranis.livejournal.com
Sexy and funny. I love it. :)

> Nobody but me gets to make you this hard.

YAY!

on 2006-02-21 10:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

I see Dean as very possessive of things he sees as his, and Sammy is definitely on that list. *g*

on 2006-02-01 08:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] literati.livejournal.com
You couldn't be anymore IC if you tried.

Bloody brilliant!

on 2006-02-21 10:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you, Pookie! *smooches you*

on 2006-02-01 09:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] frayen.livejournal.com
GUH!! I LOVE kinky!Sam, and the last line? Bwahahah!

I heart this fic so damn much!

on 2006-02-21 10:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think both of those boys have hidden kinks - we just have to find them. ;)

on 2006-02-01 01:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mylenn.livejournal.com
*shivers* So very hot!

I'll be in my bunk. ;)

on 2006-02-21 10:19 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Bunk comments are always extra-treasured. ;)

on 2006-02-01 03:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com
Heeee! Dude, that's not normal. Heeeee!

Oh, this was great. What a job for Sam to have - chasing bitey things when he has a bite fetish. *g*

on 2006-02-21 10:20 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thanks!

I think they both have a lot of kinks and fetishes and I'm going to have fun uncovering every single one. ;)

on 2006-02-01 05:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] abouttheboys.livejournal.com
Oh my friggin' Gods! This is so hott. Maybe hotter than you intended but I'm guilty of having a...HEALTHY kink for biting.^_^

The last line is just so Dean!

on 2006-02-21 10:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Trust me, I know how hot it is, I have a biting kink too, not just in fandom either. ;)

I started writing fanfic in the Buffyverse - Spike/Xander, so biting fic was a biiiiiiig part of my life, and I love it so much I share it with my other fandoms too. *g*

on 2006-02-01 07:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mutelorelei.livejournal.com
Excellent. Very hot.

on 2006-02-21 10:23 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D

on 2006-02-01 07:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] moimoietmoi.livejournal.com
Wow, that was brilliant! Both hot as hell and so funny! *snerks*
Sam is one sick puppy! *g*

on 2006-02-21 10:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you!

yes, Sam is a sick little puppy, but Dean loves him for it and is going to take advantage of the fact over and over again. ;)

on 2006-02-01 09:37 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] tabaqui
Wheeee!
Ooh, baby.
:)

*bounce*

Love it.

on 2006-02-21 10:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thankee! :D (I am sooooooooooo behind in replying to fb it's shameful!)

on 2006-02-01 11:09 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cala-jane.livejournal.com
GUH!
Dude we should so make Dean that angry more often
*uhm... reads the sentence again*
It does make sens, right?
Ah, to hell with it. I don't care about making sense.
Me. Love. Fic.

on 2006-02-21 10:25 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
It makes perfect sense. Angry Dean = angry Wincest + bruised/hurty Sam = YUM!

Thanks. :D

on 2006-02-02 05:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
Oh my freakin... Wow... That was just so... WOW!!

Yep... Head+icebucket=now...

Total yum, dear!

*Worships you adoringly...*

on 2006-02-21 10:26 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you sweetie!

*checks to make sure you haven't drowned in that nucket*

Ooh... iceplay! *plots*

on 2006-02-02 06:22 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] saifai.livejournal.com
Wowsa. *drools* Nice kink he's got there.

...

Damnit! You made me look! *scowls and hugs you hard anyway*

on 2006-02-21 10:27 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Ha! I got you hooked, didn't I? I am such a shameless enabler in this fandom. :D

Thankee! These boys are sooooo kinky!

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on 2006-02-03 03:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] dimitri-aidan.livejournal.com
Lol...that was so...wow. Intense is the only word I can come up, from Dean's words (only he can make Sam that hard...shiver worthy) to the way Dean reacted to Sam's reactions and...the last line was perfect. It made me laugh and sit back and fell utterly content, as if I hadnt been practically drooling a moment before.

Biting is sexy though...I can totally understand where Sam is coming from.

on 2006-02-21 10:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
I have a very healthy biting kink of my own, and I like to share. And I think Dean has the propensity to be very possessive, so yeah, only he's allowed to get Sam so hot and bothered. :D

Thanks!

on 2006-02-03 07:58 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cornporngirl.livejournal.com
*snicker* you dirty dirty boy sammy

on 2006-02-21 10:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
isn't he just? *g*

Thanks!

on 2006-02-03 03:09 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] petra-lindner.livejournal.com
Your little story created some extremely hot pictures in my mind.
Thanks for the images.
Incredible.

on 2006-02-21 10:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Thank you! The hot pictures in my head are what make me write - I want to share the pretty. *g*

on 2006-02-04 08:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_beetle_/
An elbow to the sternum stilled Sam just long enough for Dean to snatch his clawing hands and force them over Sam's head. Suddenly they were eye-to-eye, groin-to-groin, and motionless, with only the sound of harsh, hitching breaths to break the heavy silence.

"She nearly bit you, you - jackass!"

Sam's pulse spiked under Dean's grip tight around his wrist and Dean's eyes widened in disbelief.

"Oh, you gotta be kidding me!"

A dull flush spread like wildfire across Sam's cheeks, down his throat to slip beneath the collar of his shirt. It drew Dean's eyes and tongue to the shadowed hollow between his clavicles. One fast, open-mouthed kiss to that patch of fiery flesh and he was back in Sam's face, more furious than before.

"Tell me you weren't thinking with your dick back there, Sammy. You weren't just gonna let her suck you dry, right?"

Sam's erection twitched so hard it almost broke his zipper.

"Oh, man, you are one sick puppy."

Dean slid down a couple of inches and nudged aside wool and cotton, teeth dragging delicately across Sam's collarbone.

Sam whined.

"Nobody else." Dean nipped the salt slick flesh beneath his tongue and thrust his hips down as Sam bucked. "You got that, Sam? Nobody but me gets to make you this hard."

Snake fast, he turned his head and bit, hard, deep and true. Sam's voice cracked on a scream. He came.

Wave after wave of shuddering pleasure wracked Sam's frame and Dean could only cling on for the ride. Sam's breath was still stuttering in rhythm with his pulse when Dean pulled back and stared at him incredulously.

"Dude, that's not normal."


You should be illegal. Seriously. Cuz dude? That's not normal.

*rereads story*
Normal is over-rated, anyway.

Going into memories, this is!

on 2006-02-21 10:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com
Going into memories, this is!

Thank you! Normal is totally over-rated. It could almost be looked on as an insult. ;)

Thankee!
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