This is really good, I think you've got the voices down very well, especillay Dru as she has a very hard voice to get.
Only tiny, little, teeniest niggle. Which just be totally me. It felt like you had a little too much dialogue for Dru, it was all good stuff and all sounded perfectly like her, but I don't imagine her going on for quite so long.
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on 2004-07-04 07:49 pm (UTC)Only tiny, little, teeniest niggle. Which just be totally me. It felt like you had a little too much dialogue for Dru, it was all good stuff and all sounded perfectly like her, but I don't imagine her going on for quite so long.
I love this fic though!!! Go the Jesse mourning.