I am completely remiss because I never comment to tell you how much I love this verse and admire how much characterization, plot, and emotion you can pack into such beautifully concise words.
But this: Angelus turned cold eyes from the still, pale body that had lain unmoving and yet incorrupt for ten days.
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on 2005-12-07 03:41 am (UTC)But this:
Angelus turned cold eyes from the still, pale body that had lain unmoving and yet incorrupt for ten days.
"He'll wake soon. He's my son. I feel him."
is particularly well-done. It made me shiver.